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Identify a strength or strengths in
  your assessment: 
  
Strengths included:  
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  Identifying the impact, the campaign had on
  the audience (making them sympathise) and addressing that it created a
  negative image.  
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  I stated the colours and dark shades of
  colour that was used to draw on the loss and pain shown.  
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  Outlining the contexts which are societies
  anxieties – portraying people to feel pressure about money, jobs and homes. 
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  I discussed the use of bold, capital
  letters which draws the attention on the red associating with blood or anger.
   
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  On the other hand, I included the ratio of
  women to men which makes people feel sorry for the stereotypical ‘weak’
  gender.  
  
  
What are the areas you need to improve? 
  
  
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  To improve, I could have expanded on point
  about more women being shown than men – to say that these problems can occur
  to anyone.  
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  I need to be more specific with examples of
  typography  
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  Remember to layout the answer using … ‘this’
  represents… which shows… is used because… 
  
  
  
What do you need to focus on for your
  next advert assessment? 
  
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  I need to revise the shelter advert in
  detail to ensure I know what the full stories were and what the text actually
  says so that if I get an unseen advert or a question without the advert to
  reference, then I know what to write. (how to write in more depth) 
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  Remember DRCAGES and CLIFT to receive high
  marks 
  
Points that could have been made: 
-       The
  red font resembles pain, danger and death. It also is shown on the logo –
  therefore they both link to one another. 
-       The
  colour red conveys a negative image to the audience  
-       The
  normal looking women make them seem relatable 
-       Being
  able to see through the font suggests that you are able to see through the
  problem they are facing  
-       There
  are three different situations shown on the advertising campaign; one in
  debt, tenant kicks him out so they don’t have a home, lose their job  
-       They
  all have anxious facial expressions which identify the impact the issue is
  having on them 
-       The
  black background draws on the faces making them stand out  
-       The
  close up images draws on accurate depiction of their emotions – so it is
  clear and visible  
-       Adverts
  are designed to make the audience feel empathy towards the people. The overall
  aim is to create awareness 
-       The
  advert also features web links and a number to call which shows that the
  audience can reach out and help the victims. It also makes them feel guilty
  for not helping if they ignore it.   
-       Similar
  people but in different situations show that they are all one and that
  situations like these can happen to anyone. On the other hand, the use of two
  women enforces this message – that it can be anyone in this position. The use
  of women is unexpected and makes the audience realise that it isn’t just
  lower class men that it happens to.  
  
  
  
  
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